Friday, 25 October 2019

Swimming Poem

     Swimming Poem!

Heart Pounding
Arms Stroking
Legs Kicking
Blood Pumping
Fingers Gliding throw the water
instructor yelling Kick Kick Kick!!
Eyes Locked on the end
Arms splashing
Legs pounding on the water
123 Breath 123 Breath 123 Breath
and that's swimming.






  
     
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 10:20

    Hi Nevaeh great blog post. How come every line except the 6th and last have capital letters.

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  2. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 10:29

    Hey vay
    I love your swimming poem. you really explained what training is!😂
    good job

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