You have an interesting design. You may need to think about the parts of your boat, as at the moment you are missing a keel which is a key part of your boat for stability and to help prevent sinking. Can you also think of an alternative material that you could use for the sail?
Hi Nevaeh, My Name is Charli from Grey Main School. I really like the design of your boat and how you have added heaps of detail to it. Maybe next time you could put some photos of your boat that you made. Keep up the great work!
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You have an interesting design. You may need to think about the parts of your boat, as at the moment you are missing a keel which is a key part of your boat for stability and to help prevent sinking. Can you also think of an alternative material that you could use for the sail?
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ReplyDeleteMy Name is Charli from Grey Main School. I really like the design of your boat and how you have added heaps of detail to it. Maybe next time you could put some photos of your boat that you made. Keep up the great work!