Heavy breathing, everyone silent “take your marks! *FWEET* “ driving into the water my goggles slowly fill with liquid *water* as it slowly drop by drop fills my eyes until stinging, * voices blur until gone* hearing nothing but my breathing, stroke by stroke, kick by kick until the voice came clear again “ GOOO!!” screaming yelling everybody cheering “GO GO GO!” 4 lengths in *2 more to go i say in my head* “ enable beast mode!” starting to sprint i am in the front “GOOOO NEVAEH!!” last length, closer and closer to the wall I slam my hand against it, until everyone goes quiet “YESAHHHHHH!” voices cheer loudly as i look around to everyone still swimming “IM 1ST!!” looking over to my mum cheering with joy “IM 1STTTTT” * 1st, 2nd, 3rd medals all together* i jump out of the pool as my team comes and hugs me “1st second and third vaeh OMGG!” said Nevaeh Lawton
i'm happy !
The day after we went and celebrated as a team “MACCAS!!!” all of use kids *team* in the maccas park eating on the slide tik-toking and talking.
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