Thursday, 12 March 2020

Poem #1

This is Just to Say 
by willams Carlous and  Nevaeh Gardner
I have punched a hole in the wall :/
that were recently been covered with pictures 
and which cost a lot of money
And you are going to get mad
Forgive me, i had to take my Anger out on someone or something.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Neveah, it’s Indi from Karoro School.

    I love your poem. I did the same poem in my class last week. Same with the other senior classes in my school. Did you actually punch the wall or did you make something up and think of that? Again just check out for punctuation mistakes ( I have to all the time ).

    My poem is on my blog so to see it go to Indira@karoro school ( my blog ) . Great Job!!!!!!! Ngā mihi, Indi. 😀😀😀😊😊😊

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