Friday, 8 November 2019

Sweet sweet Home!

О̄taki is one of the best places I know.
О̄taki has amazing cafes and refreshing rivers.
О̄taki has a woderfull beach with millions of seguls flying around you looking for food.
О̄taki also has delicious fish 'n' chip shops all around О̄taki.
Some people call it Sunny О̄taki as sometimes the whether plays with use 
In О̄taki I have alot of cousins as i walk around town I can call some one cuzzy with out asking if we are cousins.


Were I live high on a hill by alot of trucks and diggers building the new road its loud but quiet at night. We have amazing shops like New World,Countdown, BP and more.

For your holidays come to О̄taki were you could experiences it your self. :)


1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Nevaeh,
    I am Phoebe from Karoro School, Greymouth. I really enjoyed reading your writing about your home, Ōtaki. My favourite part was when you said ‘in Ōtaki I have a lot of cousins as I walk around town I can call someone cuzzy without asking if we are cousins’.

    Next time you should check for spelling mistakes and make sure the text is all one size because it makes it look tidy.

    Have you ever been to Greymouth? You shouldn’t listen to the weather forecast here in Greymouth because you never know what it will be. We also have some pretty amazing rivers too.

    Good Job
    Phoebe

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